I love this one. I think "George Read" at the top makes it awesomer. That should be this monster's name. You oughta make some George Read comics with him. It is such an awkward name for him so it's more funny.
Ha ! Great idea. Like when something deadly has a cutesy name, but this one is just kinda mundane. Still haven't figured out whether the stuff going on atop his head is supposed to be headgear, or organic !
To me it looked like horns and a blazing foom of fire. That could be funny a monster whose head is aflame, and if he does normal everyday things his head causes him frustrations and havoc. He can't even lay down on the bed without catching his pillow on fire.
Love that idea ! I feel that way when I have too many thoughts and can't capture them quick enough to write before sleep.