tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32992859626872190.post4711377648184795322..comments2023-06-13T06:44:35.424-07:00Comments on HUNGRY COMIX: KID STUFF, DAY EIGHTEEN !Runs.with.Feralshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15633149475126315592noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32992859626872190.post-69332606740957882442012-05-07T15:58:55.029-07:002012-05-07T15:58:55.029-07:00That lousy teacher! What's wrong with them?! W...That lousy teacher! What's wrong with them?! Way to make a kid feel terrible. I wish I was within slapping distance of this teacher's face.KWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01792617397718781026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32992859626872190.post-67673034325372633332012-04-20T00:03:39.071-07:002012-04-20T00:03:39.071-07:00Hi!! (I deleted my original response due to bad gr...Hi!! (I deleted my original response due to bad grammar that I failed to catch) Your overall grammar seems fine, maybe that transition from page 1 to page 2 (asking for, or getting up to fetch another piece of paper) is what made you loose your train of thought.evm111https://www.blogger.com/profile/14296728778285737849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32992859626872190.post-41476142185663148442012-04-20T00:00:56.551-07:002012-04-20T00:00:56.551-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.evm111https://www.blogger.com/profile/14296728778285737849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32992859626872190.post-18017910425493372642012-04-19T06:46:14.934-07:002012-04-19T06:46:14.934-07:00No text missing; I checked twice myself when takin...No text missing; I checked twice myself when taking these pics; BAD GRAMMAR is all, with a 'poor ending' assessed by the Teacher.Runs.with.Feralshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15633149475126315592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32992859626872190.post-72074151593341267502012-04-18T23:57:53.979-07:002012-04-18T23:57:53.979-07:00Hiya Jamie!!!
It seems like there is a bit of ...Hiya Jamie!!!<br /> It seems like there is a bit of text missing between page 1 & 2. It goes from "and ate" to "Then he saw"...evm111https://www.blogger.com/profile/14296728778285737849noreply@blogger.com